Thursday, September 6, 2012

The Significance of My Name


I. consider my name to flow like a river and in fact that’s what it means. Just like famous India Arie I sing about things that mean a lot to me.
N.ever really was I told the importance of my name. Just that in the bible it’s a river next to a garish plane.
D.oesn’t it seem weird that my name is a country though? Although the country isn’t the place in which the river “India” flows.
I. heard the river dances as the wind plays upon the water’s surface. The blue beauty that goes “swoosh” makes happiness become one of my emotions.
A.lthough my first name is special my middle is even more than my first. It is a combination of my aunt’s and grandma’s both. Their names are Jenny and Irene and their rambunctious just like me. You now know the reason the name India Jenene was given to me.


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13 comments:

  1. UnknownSeptember 12, 2012 at 5:42 AM

    I liked the style of your poem.:)

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  2. UnknownSeptember 12, 2012 at 5:42 AM

    India!!! I love how you made you're name like flow with your poem. Nice job

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  3. UnknownSeptember 12, 2012 at 5:42 AM

    Well written! And your name is not India. It's Dark Chocolate! Love, White Chocolate

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  4. UnknownSeptember 12, 2012 at 5:42 AM

    You did a great job! I love your poem, it was very creative and different, good job (:

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  5. UnknownSeptember 12, 2012 at 5:42 AM

    That was a short poem, but even on those little amount of words, it was much more deeper than I could ever possibly think that it was. That was great.

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  6. UnknownSeptember 12, 2012 at 5:42 AM

    Very nice and open hearted

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  7. JadenSeptember 12, 2012 at 5:42 AM

    Wow... That's all I can really say.. It. Was. Amazing. I loved how it rhymed & how personal it was. <3

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  8. juarketsquareSeptember 12, 2012 at 5:42 AM

    I always enjoy leaning how names are formed, and it is cool to see combination of your middle name.

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  9. AnonymousSeptember 12, 2012 at 5:42 AM

    I really like how you included your middle name in your writing

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  10. Lanae BanksSeptember 12, 2012 at 5:43 AM

    I like how you added your middle name and how you got it very nice touch (:

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  11. UnknownSeptember 12, 2012 at 5:44 AM

    I like the way you write it and emphasizing your INDIA ..beautiful poem cousin I loved it. :)) i could really imagine what you were you saying and you are a very good writer keep it up :))

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  12. UnknownSeptember 12, 2012 at 5:44 AM

    I honestly loved it. Great format, lovely vocabulary, beautiful name. Favorite part "I sing about things that mean a lot to me."

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  13. MattieSeptember 12, 2012 at 5:44 AM

    I really like your poem. It's very good, and I loved reading about how you got your middle name!

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